News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspaper. What focus do you think influence these decisions? Do we become to used to bad news, and would it be better more good news was reported?
Media outlets editors decide what to send on-air on television and what to print in newspapers.
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news
on TV and read the best science discoveries in newspapers.
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News
channel decisions are always dictated by someone in the hierarchy of their sponsor echelons. Wherein, their donors always push them to broadcast their agenda to people around the world, Use synonyms
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they
send millions of newspapers for them to read, and have directly influenced their minds in a good way or in a bad way. Correct pronoun usage
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For example
, a number of Western media, Linking Words
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propagates
Islamophobia propaganda under the finance of their racist donors.
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science
discoveries on TV and read appealing Replace the word
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news
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, the minds of humans are adoptable if they hear, watch, and read rewarding Linking Words
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. They may feel optimistic about the future, and their entire body will become energized with full potential to be a better human in society. And Use synonyms
on the other hand
, if they hear bad Linking Words
news
, they may feel anxious, and their minds will completely freeze. Use synonyms
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will completely lose hope for the future, which is detrimental Correct pronoun usage
one
for
all humans.
In conclusion, many of the media are sponsored by tycoons, and they are the ones who dictate what Change preposition
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news
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whereas
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news
promotes oxytocin hormones and helps humans live longer.Use synonyms
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