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The table below gives information about the amount of tax collected (as % of GDP ) in five countries for 4 years between 1975 and 2005.

The table below gives information about the amount of tax collected (as % of GDP ) in five countries for 4 years between 1975 and 2005.
#information #amount #tax #gdp #five #countries #years
The chart reveals
the
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information about the amount of
tax
 collected in four different
countries
as
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Sweden
,
USA
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the USA
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, Korea,
Japan
 and Turkey throughout four years between 1975 and 2005.
Overall
, the highest
percent
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percentage
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 was reached by
Sweden
 in 2005 at 70,1%,
while
 the
least
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lowest
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 was accomplished by Korea at 27,3% the same year. The lowest
percentage
 for the entire period was
showed
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shown
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 by Turkey in 1986 and
Japan
 in 1975 equally at 15%. In 1975,
Sweden
 showed
the
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a
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 result
at
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of
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 46% of
GDP
, which was the highest point among all other
countries
, at the time when
Japan
 reached the lowest result at only 15% of
GDP
. 10 years later, in 1985,
Sweden
 did not lose the grip and still stayed as the highest
GDP
 collected
country
,
while
 the
percentage
 in Turkey slightly reduced from 16,4% to 15% and became the same
to
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Japan
 in 1975. In 1995 all
countries
rised
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raised
rise
rose
 in
tax
collecting
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percentage
 and
Sweden
 slightly went up from 47% to 51%, and again still remained on the top rating.
and
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Japan
 became the lowest
in
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tax
percentage
country
,
comparing
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compared
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 to
other
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the other
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 four
countries
. The
last
 2005th year
was
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ended with
such
 results:
Sweden
 reached 70,1% of
GDP
 and finished as the highest
GDP
 collecting
country
,
while
 Korea finalized at
the
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27,3% of
tax
 collecting and became the lowest
tax
 collecting
country
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tax, countries, sweden, japan, percentage, gdp, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • GDP (Gross Domestic Product)
  • tax collection
  • percentage (%)
  • trends
  • fluctuations
  • increase/decrease
  • economic impact
  • tax rates
  • comparative analysis
  • data interpretation
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