The table below gives information about the amount of tax collected (as % of GDP ) in five countries for 4 years between 1975 and 2005.
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collected in four different Use synonyms
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as
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Sweden
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USA
, Korea, Correct article usage
the USA
Japan
and Turkey throughout four years between 1975 and 2005.
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, the highest Linking Words
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Sweden
in 2005 at 70,1%, Use synonyms
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was accomplished by Korea at 27,3% the same year. The lowest Correct word choice
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percentage
for the entire period was Use synonyms
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by Turkey in 1986 and Wrong verb form
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Japan
in 1975 equally at 15%.
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Sweden
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46% of Change preposition
of
GDP
, which was the highest point among all other Use synonyms
countries
, at the time when Use synonyms
Japan
reached the lowest result at only 15% of Use synonyms
GDP
. 10 years later, in 1985, Use synonyms
Sweden
did not lose the grip and still stayed as the highest Use synonyms
GDP
collected Use synonyms
country
, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
percentage
in Turkey slightly reduced from 16,4% to 15% and became the same Use synonyms
to
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Japan
in 1975. In 1995 all Use synonyms
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percentage
and Use synonyms
Sweden
slightly went up from 47% to 51%, and again still remained on the top rating. Use synonyms
and
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Japan
became the lowest Use synonyms
in
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tax
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percentage
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country
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comparing
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compared
other
four Correct article usage
the other
countries
.
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such
results: Linking Words
Sweden
reached 70,1% of Use synonyms
GDP
and finished as the highest Use synonyms
GDP
collecting Use synonyms
country
, Use synonyms
while
Korea finalized at Linking Words
the
27,3% of Correct article usage
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tax
collecting and became the lowest Use synonyms
tax
collecting Use synonyms
country
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