You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just read an article in a national newspapaer which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. •Write a letter to the editor of the newspapaer. In your letter •Say which points in the article you agree with •Explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres •Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of article. Write at least 150 words
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to discuss my review of the article which I read last
week on
national newspapers.
I have been living in my home country since I was born. Change preposition
in
This
is the first time in my 25 years, I had
read Wrong verb form
have
this
article. When I read it, I was so surprised because the articel
says that all Correct your spelling
article
town
centres look same
in Canada. Correct article usage
the same
Whereas
, I totally disagree to
Change preposition
with
this
point only some of the points were right but not all. First of all, every town
have
Change the verb form
has
different
type of building structure it is not at all Correct article usage
a different
same
. If I compare Correct article usage
the same
town
Correct article usage
the town
centre
of Mississauga, Brampton and Toronto all are different. In Toronto's Fix the agreement mistake
centres
town
centre
there is CN Add a comma
centre,
tower
, in Mississauga Capitalize word
Tower
its
Square Replace the word
it's
it is
one
and in Capitalize word
One
Brampton
it is Add a comma
Brampton,
bramelea
city centre. They Change the capitalization
Bramelea
dosen't
look similar. Few Verb problem
don't
of
shopping centres are Change preposition
apply
same
but it doesn't Correct article usage
the same
means
all towns are Change the verb form
mean
same
. I would like to invite you Correct article usage
the same
in
my city and we will explore Change preposition
to
another cities
worth all Replace the adjective
another city
other cities
different
Correct article usage
the different
town
centres.
Hope to hear back soon.
Yours faithfully,
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coherence cohesion
Try to use paragraphs more effectively to clearly separate different points and ideas. This will improve the logical flow of your writing. Each paragraph should present a single idea and include supporting details.
task achievement
Ensure you fully respond to each part of the task. Expand on the ways in which your town centre differs from others to provide a more complete response. Include specific characteristics or features that set it apart.
task achievement
Reinforce your opinion with more concrete examples and avoid overly general statements. This will help improve the persuasiveness of your argument.
task achievement
Your tone is suitable for a letter to a newspaper editor – polite and respectful.
coherence cohesion
You've included a proper greeting and closing, which adds to the formality of the letter.
task achievement
You have effectively identified and explained your disagreement with the article, clearly stating your viewpoint.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.