A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her explain how to apply for the job
Dear Ali
Ewas
so glad when ii heard you Correct your spelling
Was
are
coming Wrong verb form
were
in
my country, and was I not only happy, but Change preposition
to
also
more eager to see you after 5 years.
Any way
, as you are Replace the word
Anyway
fining
a good job in Iran ,you asked me about Correct your spelling
finding
this
issue in your last
letter ,ihave
a Correct your spelling
I have
have
grate
suggestion for you. I would Correct your spelling
great
like
inform you that one of the most famous Add the particle
like to
company
in our area is hiring some new force workers Change to a plural noun
companies
according
the technical parts of their factory. Their payment is enough for dealing with your life and their work time is 7 hours per day.
Since you are interested Add the preposition
according to
on
technical work and you have a lot of talent in Change the preposition
in
this
field, It is so really suite
for your character.
Correct your spelling
suited
An
the other hand if you agree with my advice, I can give an application from them, so I will send Correct your spelling
On
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it for
for
you. , Change preposition
to
therefore
you can fill in
and return Correct pronoun usage
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to
me or send Correct pronoun usage
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to
them directlyCorrect pronoun usage
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..
Replace the punctuation
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...
Ihope
they accept your Correct your spelling
I hope
apply
, and we can meet another after several years .Let me know if you have any Replace the word
application
question
.
Best wishes
Ali SaremiFix the agreement mistake
questions
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grammar
There are a few grammatical errors and typos, such as "Ewas" instead of "I was," "fining" instead of "finding," "grate" instead of "great," and "suite" instead of "suit." Pay attention to these small errors as they can slightly affect the clarity of your letter.
cohesion
Using more transition words and phrases can help smooth the flow between ideas and paragraphs.
structure
Your letter is structured nicely with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
tone
The tone of the letter is friendly and appropriate for the context, maintaining a balance between formality and friendliness.