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The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart exemplifies the proportion of adult
smokers
 among men in seven different countries
together with
 the world average in the
year
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 2000 and 2015.
Overall
,it is evident that 6 states witnessed a decline in shares and the remaining countries saw a surge in
percentage
.
To begin
 with, the world's average male
smokers
 decreased steadily, reaching around 30% in 2015.Over the period,Amenia and Bangladesh demonstrated a similar trend with an initial value above 60%.
However
,the proportion of the male population in Bangladesh who smoke had significantly declined by roughly 20% compared to Amenia with just around
10
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% difference.
In addition
,despite Egypt and Lebanon
stood
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 at around the same shares at the beginning of the period,the chunks of male
smokers
 in Egypt was slightly higher than in Lebanon amounting to half of the male population Other than that,Cuba maintained a consistently low
percentage
 of male
smokers
 with little variation between two years.
Although
 Mexico and Australia begin at around the same
percentage
 which
just
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 about one-third ,Mexico experienced a higher drop in
percentage
 compared to Australia
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words smokers, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart, percentage, adult male smokers
  • world average, increased, decreased
  • tobacco consumption, lung cancer
  • public health, awareness campaigns
  • government policy, smoking bans
  • health risks, nicotine, tobacco industry
  • chart analysis, data comparison
  • statistical trend, significant fluctuation
  • stagnation, steady rise, moderate fall
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