The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the
number
of attendees participating in various events—the film club
, martial arts, amateur dramatics, table
tennis
, and musical performances—at a specific organization in Melbourne, Australia, from 2000 to 2020.
To begin
with, participation in the film club
was the most popular activity at the social centre. Although
the number
of participants
in this
club
remained relatively stable, fluctuating between 60 and 70, it consistently represented the highest level of engagement throughout the entire period, peaking at approximately 65 participants
in 2020. Similarly
, the figures for martial arts exhibited a comparable trend, with fluctuations ranging from 30 to 40 participants
.
In contrast
, the patterns of the other three activities were different. Regarding musical performances, the number
of attendees continuously increased from 0 in 2005 to nearly 20 by 2020. The figures for table
tennis
also
experienced consistent growth, rising from about 16 participants
in 2000 to approximately 53 participants
by 2020. This
rate of increase was significantly faster than that of musical performances, ultimately making table
tennis
the second most popular activity. Conversely
, amateur dramatics followed a different trajectory, experiencing a slight increase from roughly 26 participants
in 2000 to 29 by 2005, before undergoing a continuous decline to just 7 participants
by 2020.
Overall
, it is clear that
participation in the film club
was the most favoured activity, accounting for the highest number
of participants
throughout the entire period. Furthermore
, table
tennis
saw the most significant increase in participation, highlighting a shift in engagement preferences among attendees.Submitted by 645119931 on
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