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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items ni five different countries ni 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items ni five different countries ni 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table represents the
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 data on the money spent on various items in the nations of Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey in 2002.
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, every country spent the most money on
food
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,
drinks
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 and
tobacco
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 among other categories. In clothing and footwear, Italy spent more than any other country,
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 Spain spent the least for
leisure
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 or
education
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 purposes. Nearly a third of Turkey's expenditure was on
food
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,
drinks
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 and
tobacco
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 and 4.35% on
leisure
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 and
education
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, making it the highest spender in both these categories.
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 was closely followed by Ireland
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 despite being the second highest spender on
food
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,
drinks
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 and
tobacco
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 ( 28.91%), spent the second least on
leisure
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 or
education
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 at 2.21%. Both the countries spent nearly the same on clothing or footwear. Spain's consumerism on
food
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,
drinks
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 and
tobacco
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 accounted for nearly a fifth, making it the third largest consumer in
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 category,
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 it had the lowest expenditure of only 1.98% in
lesiure
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leisure
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education
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.
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 was closely followed by Italy and Sweden
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 spent approximately the same in both
food
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,
drinks
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,
tobacco
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 ( 16.37% vs 15.77%) and
leisure
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,
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education
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and education
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 ( 3.2% vs 3.22%) .
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, Italy spent the highest amount of 9% on clothing,
footwear
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and footwear
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 and Sweden spent the least (5.4%) among any other country in
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 category.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, drinks, tobacco, leisure, education with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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