The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items ni five different countries ni 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items ni five different countries ni 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table represents the
percentage wise
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data on the money spent on various items in the nations of Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey in 2002.
Overall
, every country spent the most money on
food
,
drinks
and
tobacco
among other categories. In clothing and footwear, Italy spent more than any other country,
whereas
Spain spent the least for
leisure
or
education
purposes. Nearly a third of Turkey's expenditure was on
food
,
drinks
and
tobacco
and 4.35% on
leisure
and
education
, making it the highest spender in both these categories.
This
was closely followed by Ireland
that
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which
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despite being the second highest spender on
food
,
drinks
and
tobacco
( 28.91%), spent the second least on
leisure
or
education
at 2.21%. Both the countries spent nearly the same on clothing or footwear. Spain's consumerism on
food
,
drinks
and
tobacco
accounted for nearly a fifth, making it the third largest consumer in
this
category,
although
it had the lowest expenditure of only 1.98% in
lesiure
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leisure
and
education
.
This
was closely followed by Italy and Sweden
that
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which
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spent approximately the same in both
food
,
drinks
,
tobacco
( 16.37% vs 15.77%) and
leisure
,
education
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and education
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( 3.2% vs 3.22%) .
However
, Italy spent the highest amount of 9% on clothing,
footwear
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and footwear
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and Sweden spent the least (5.4%) among any other country in
this
category.
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