The Two Maps Below Show Road Access to a City Hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Surrounding the hospital was Ring
Road
, which was connected to City Road
by Hospital Road
. By 2010, two roundabouts had been added, at the junctions of Hospital Road
with Ring Road
and with
City Change preposition
apply
Road
respectively.
There was a car park for staff and the public on the southeast side of Ring Road
in 2007. However
, by 2010, it had become a staff-only car park, and a new public one had been built on the east side of this
road
.
Furthermore
, the bus stops at
both sides of Hospital Change preposition
on
Road
had
been replaced by a large bus station with direct access to the two roundabouts.Wrong verb form
have
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