Some people believe that international trade and communication with other countries is a positive trend, while others think it is harmful to nations and they might lose their identities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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international
trade is a trend between countries. some say that it is
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beneficial
for economic
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growth
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, some disagree
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that. In
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will be discussed. Interaction and communication between various countries might be advantageous.
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places have their own climate, natural resources, history and culture, which influence their materialism.
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, in China, they have good quality
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tea leaves and
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labour force.
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task achievement
Ensure that each main idea is developed with examples and explanations.
coherence cohesion
Conclude your essay with a clear summary of your opinion regarding the topic.
coherence cohesion
The introduction effectively sets up a discussion of both views.
task achievement
The topic is relevant and current, with a clear statement of the issue.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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