Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. to what extent do you agree or disagree ?
It is argued that advertisement is the major cause behind the huge sale of popular consumer goods and does not mirror the real things that a society needs. I strongly agree with
this
notion because of the attractive and urgency
trap created for products.
Many Replace the word
urgent
large scale
enterprises are Add a hyphen
large-scale
profit driven
which means that their primary goal is to lure the consumers into buying their products even if it is at the cost of the buyers themselves. Take fairness creams Add a hyphen
profit-driven
for
example
. The market strategy behind such
products is to instill
a sense of inferiority among those "brown-skinned" by selling the idea that fairness equates with beauty which brings guaranteed success. Change the spelling
instil
For
example
, a fairness cream company called 'Fair and Lovely' was the most sold
product in India in 2020, Add a hyphen
most-sold
specially
among the lower middle class or poor, Replace the word
especially
while
their real needs for employment and nutrition went unfulfilled.
Furthermore
, apart from making it attractive, advertisements are also
designed in a way so that you feel the fear of missing out on them. Take IPhone
Fix capitalization
iPhone
for
example
. The youth gets influenced to buy it, then
shows off in their circles through social media, which inturn
pressurises their peers to buy it by hook or crook which in turn Correct your spelling
in turn
rises
the sales. Correct your spelling
raises
This
creates a loop. For
example
, In India, a 19-year old
unemployed son of a daily wage Add a hyphen
19-year-old
laborer
went viral for starving and getting his mother to exhaust all her savings, just to get him an Change the spelling
labourer
IPhone
. The influence of ads creates Fix capitalization
iPhone
such
hype that the poor child couldn't
differentiate between real needs like jobs and food.
Wrong verb form
can't
To conclude
, advertisements create a sense of urgency and desire for things that people may not really need, but end up buying them
in huge numbers Correct pronoun usage
apply
due to
this
trap.Submitted by man3meet4 on
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Ensure that your introduction briefly outlines the main arguments you will discuss.
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Consider including counterarguments to provide a more balanced perspective.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a clear progression of ideas, linking paragraphs and sections with transitional phrases.
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Strong use of examples that illustrate and support your main points effectively.
coherence cohesion
Logical structure and clear progression of ideas across the essay.
coherence cohesion
A clear and relevant conclusion that summarizes your main arguments.
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