The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart
illustrate
the proportion of power energy in Change the verb form
illustrates
Australia
, Sweden
, Iceland
and Turkey between 1997 and 2010. As can be seen, Iceland
has get
Change the verb form
got
a
highest percentage of Change the article
the
renwable
energy.Will , Correct your spelling
renewable
Australia
and sweden
have nearly Change the capitalization
Sweden
same
and Correct article usage
the same
Less
Fix the agreement mistake
fewer numbers
number
.
It is clear that
,
In Remove the comma
apply
Iceland
Add a comma
Iceland,
thir
Correct your spelling
there
is
Correct your spelling
it
incresed
in 2010 Correct your spelling
increased
around
70%. Change preposition
by around
whill
in 2000 it decreased Correct your spelling
while
will
in to
60 %.Join the words
into
In addition
, In 1997 it were
power energy drop to 45%. Change the verb form
was
Moreover
, In Turkey
Add a comma
Turkey,
thir
were increased around same Correct your spelling
their
nerly
same Correct your spelling
nearly
number
over the years. The rising were
in 2000 around 40% Correct subject-verb agreement
was
whill
in 1997 they were less Correct your spelling
while
will
in
one Point Change preposition
by
nerly
39% .In 2010 start fell Correct your spelling
nearly
in
to 31%
Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, in Austrailia
and Correct your spelling
Australia
Sweden
have the same number
. In Australia
In 1997 the Add a comma
Australia,
number of
proportion Correct quantifier usage
apply
were
less than 10% and through two years Change the verb form
was
droped
to Correct your spelling
dropped
nerly
1%. Correct your spelling
barely
However
, In sweden
Change the capitalization
Sweden
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
proportion
in 1997 Correct article usage
a proportion
around
2% and Add a missing verb
was around
grow
to under 10%.
Wrong verb form
grew
To sum up
, we could say that, Iceland
Change preposition
in Iceland
thir
Correct your spelling
their
were
increased Change the verb form
was
overe
the years Correct your spelling
over
while
in Australia
were decreased.Submitted by almay
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, sweden, iceland, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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