task1: the graph and table show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year un three major cities
The graph and table
are illustrating
the Wrong verb form
illustrate
varies
Replace the word
variations
of
Change preposition
in
temperature
throughout the year and the number of hours
of sunshine among
three cities respectively.
As Change preposition
in
it is
shown by Verb problem
apply
graph
, The Add an article
the graph
temperature
in London and New York has quite
similar pattern. The Change the article
quite a
a quite
temperature
is lowest in the beginning and the end of the year in those two cities, which
the Correct your spelling
with
temperature
approximately 5 to 10 degrees Celsius in January and December. The trend increases from April and hit
the peak Wrong verb form
hits
to
July, which Change preposition
in
estimates
to Wrong verb form
is estimated
25
to 30 degrees Celsius. Add a missing verb
be 25
On the contrary
, Sydney shows the
Correct article usage
a
difference
trend, where Replace the word
different
highest
Add an article
the highest
temperature
is in January and December and the lowest temperature
is lowest
in July.
It’s clear from the table that sunshine Correct word choice
apply
hours
both in New York and Sydney are nearly equal, having daytime 2535 and 2473 hours
per year, respectively. On the other hand
, London has sunshine hours
just
about 1180 Change preposition
of just
hour
which is the lowest compared to those citiesFix the agreement mistake
hours
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words temperature, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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