The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.
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The table gives information about how the UK unemployed spent their
time
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in four categories for the
last
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year.
Overall
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, in the morning
women
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has
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have
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the largest
percentages
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percentage
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of
spending
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apply
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their
time
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,
whereas
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in the
afternoon
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women
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has
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have
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the lowest
number
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in
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on
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te
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the
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table. Looking at the details, the highest
number
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of men spending their
time
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in the mornings was 22% on finding
job
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a job
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and 20% on shopping,
while
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the lowest
number
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was 2% on dropping. Meanwhile, in the
afternoon
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it was only 12% for job hunting and 9% for spending their
time
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on shopping. In the morning the
number
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of watching TV and playing
sport
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sports
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were similar (4 and 4), at the same
time
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walking and visiting town has
also
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the same percentage (5 and 5). During the
afternoon
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, the percentage of drinking and visiting
town
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the town
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was absolutely the same (3 and 3).
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, for reading and walking men took only 8% of their
time
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. Opening
women
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section, in the morning they spent their
time
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almost on
houseworking
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housework
house working
(49%), but on playing
sport
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sports
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and drinking they spend much
more
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apply
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less
time
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(1 and 1
percentage
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). The
number
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of doing nothing/sitting around, walking and decorating something was all the same (3%).
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, in the
afternoon
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women
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spent much
lower
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less
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time
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on housework and going through the shops (21% and 17). The lowest digit was on drinking (1%) and playing
sport
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sports
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(0%),
such
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as
on
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apply
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staying in
the
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apply
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bed. For the
last
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year in the
UK
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UK,
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women
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spent only 2% of their
time
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on
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apply
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decorating and walking.
Hence
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,
on
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apply
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doing nothing/sitting around was just 6%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words time, women, afternoon, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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