IELTS Writing Practice. One of the major problems that face today’s governments is creating enough satisfactory houses for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment. Discuss this statement and give your opinion.

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The growing population and urbanization trends put significant stress on housing markets, leading to a shortage of affordable and adequate housing solutions. Governments must plan strategically to balance housing development and environmental protection.

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sustainable

housing is one way to address both housing shortages and environmental concerns. Governments can promote eco-friendly construction materials and designs to minimize environmental footprints

while

meeting housing needs.

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Introduction/Conclusion

Expand the introduction to include a brief outline of the main points to be discussed. The conclusion should summarize the main points and state your opinion clearly.

Relevance/Specific Examples

Provide more specific examples or detailed reasons explaining how sustainable housing can address housing shortages and environmental concerns.

Clear/Comprehensive Ideas

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single clear idea and develops it fully with supporting details.

Task Response

The essay addresses both housing shortages and environmental concerns, which relate well to the topic.

Logical Structure

Mention of eco-friendly construction materials and designs indicates a recognition of innovative solutions.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

urbanization
sustainable housing
eco-friendly
affordable housing
environmental footprint
high-density housing
urban sprawl
green spaces
renewable energy sources
ecological balance
urban planning policies
sustainable practices

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