Some people believe that vaping is a safer alternative to smoking and helps people quit smoking, while others think that e-cigarettes are harmful and may lead to vapers becoming smokers in the future. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days,
people
are smoking
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citrate
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cigarette
along with
vape
. But what is the most effective method for dealing with
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vape
vibe
and cigarettes becoming
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.
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Some
people
believe that
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Vaping are not
harmfull
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harmful
as
compare
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compared
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to cigarettes. In
this
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I will discuss both sides of the
arguments
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and draw a conclusion. First of all,
people
thinks
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think
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that vaping is safer, with vaping
people
think they end the smoking
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habit
.
For example
, most
of
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the
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apply
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human
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humans
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start vaping when they come to quit
the
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smoking they don't,
for ending
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the smoking
habbit
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habit
they start vaping. If they
not
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do not
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quit
taking
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smoking
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cigerate
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cigarettes
smoke
then
there
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their
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boday
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bodies
soon or later will cause different
type
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of
deases
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diseases
. So
people
think
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uses
of vapes
are
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far better
then
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than
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smoke
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smoking
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cigeratte
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cigarette
cigarettes
.
On the other hand
, there are common
beliefe
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belief
believe
beliefs
that in
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upcoming
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days
people
are
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more
addict
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of
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to
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cigarette
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cigarettes
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due to
much
use
of vapes.
For instance
, when they
use
e-cigarette
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e-cigarettes
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there focus on
to leave
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leaving
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the addiction
of
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to
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tambacco
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tobacco
cigarette
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cigarettes
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but some time of starting
vape
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vaping
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the
addict
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of
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vaping and take much more and more to inhale the
vape
smoke
.
As a result
, their health low or low day by day
due to
high
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the high
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amount of
use
the vaping. In conclusion,
although
it is
common
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thought that
people
believe and think that vaping are
good
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a good
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alternative to
guiet
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get
the
smoke
. I believe that
for
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apply
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leaving the
cigeratte
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cigarette
habbit
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habit
for
intence
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intense
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to
use
the
vape
is not good. Personally, I think vaping
are
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is
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much safer
then
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than
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cigeratte
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cigarette
cigarettes
because they have no tobacco,
vape
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Vaping
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are
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is
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comming
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common
in different
type
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types
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of
flovour
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tobacco
use
that as
compare
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compared
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the
cigeratte
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cigarettes
.
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