Some people believe that vaping is a safer alternative to smoking and helps people quit smoking, while others think that e-cigarettes are harmful and may lead to vapers becoming smokers in the future. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
These days,
people
are smoking Use synonyms
cigrate
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citrate
migrate
cigarette
along with
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vape
. But what is the most effective method for dealing with Use synonyms
vipe
and cigarettes becoming Correct your spelling
pipe
vape
vibe
smoker
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a smoker
.
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?
people
believe that Use synonyms
the
Vaping are not Correct article usage
apply
harmfull
as Correct your spelling
harmful
compare
to cigarettes. In Wrong verb form
compared
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essay
I will discuss both sides of the Add a comma
essay,
arguments
and draw a conclusion.
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argument
people
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thinks
that vaping is safer, with vaping Change the verb form
think
people
think they end the smoking Use synonyms
habbit
. Correct your spelling
habit
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, most Linking Words
of
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apply
the
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apply
human
start vaping when they come to quit Fix the agreement mistake
humans
the
smoking they don't, Correct article usage
apply
for ending
the smoking Change preposition
To end
habbit
they start vaping. If they Correct your spelling
habit
not
quit Add a missing verb
do not
taking
Verb problem
smoking
cigerate
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cigarettes
smoke
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then
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there
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their
boday
soon or later will cause different Correct your spelling
bodies
type
of Fix the agreement mistake
types
deases
. So Correct your spelling
diseases
people
think Use synonyms
usess
of vapes Correct your spelling
uses
are
far better Correct subject-verb agreement
is
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then
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than
Use synonyms
smoke
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smoking
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cigeratte
.
Correct your spelling
cigarette
cigarettes
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, there are common Linking Words
beliefe
that in Correct your spelling
belief
believe
beliefs
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the upcoming
upcoming
days Replace the word
coming
people
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are
more Wrong verb form
will be
addict
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addicted
of
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to
cigarette
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cigarettes
due to
much Linking Words
use
of vapes. Use synonyms
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, when they Linking Words
use
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e-cigarette
there focus on Fix the agreement mistake
e-cigarettes
to leave
the addiction Change the verb form
leaving
of
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to
tambacco
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tobacco
cigarette
but some time of starting Fix the agreement mistake
cigarettes
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vape
the Wrong verb form
vaping
addict
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addicted
of
vaping and take much more and more to inhale the Change preposition
to
vape
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smoke
. Use synonyms
As a result
, their health low or low day by day Linking Words
due to
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high
amount of Correct article usage
the high
use
the vaping.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
although
it is Linking Words
common
thought that Add an article
a common
people
believe and think that vaping are Use synonyms
good
alternative to Add an article
a good
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the Correct your spelling
get
smoke
. I believe that Use synonyms
for
leaving the Change preposition
apply
Use synonyms
cigeratte
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cigarette
habbit
for Correct your spelling
habit
intence
to Correct your spelling
intense
use
the Use synonyms
vape
is not good. Personally, I think vaping Use synonyms
are
much safer Change the verb form
is
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then
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than
Use synonyms
cigeratte
because they have no tobacco, Correct your spelling
cigarette
cigarettes
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vape
Fix the agreement mistake
Vaping
are
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is
comming
in different Correct your spelling
common
type
of Fix the agreement mistake
types
flovour
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tobacco
use
that as Use synonyms
compare
the Wrong verb form
compared
Use synonyms
cigeratte
.Correct your spelling
cigarettes
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