The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emossion per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, Portugal between 1967 and 2007
The line charts depict
average
of carbon dioxide substance per individual in three countries from 1967 to 2007.
Correct article usage
the average
Overall
, United
Kingdom and Correct article usage
the United
Sweden
was
two states that produced significant Change the verb form
were
this
hazardous pollution in Correct determiner usage
apply
term
of average, Fix the agreement mistake
terms
however
gradually becoming even better in
Change preposition
at
end
of the period. Add an article
the end
On the other
hand
the other two, which is Italy and Portugal experienced Add a comma
hand,
opposite
trend.
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the opposite
United
Kingdom and Correct article usage
The United
Sweden
was
the most Change the verb form
were
pollute
countries Replace the word
polluting
in
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on
average
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an average
the average
of
carbon dioxide but experienced decreasing over Change preposition
apply
the
time. United Kingdom Correct article usage
apply
remain
the top producer at around 11 metric Change the verb form
remains
tonnes
at the beginning to approximitely
9 metric Correct your spelling
approximately
tonnes
in
the end of Change the preposition
at
spectrum
. On the other side, Add an article
the spectrum
Sweden
was the second largest contributor at around 9 metric tonnes
but ultimately declining
to rank three to over 5 metric Wrong verb form
declined
tonnes
.
Difference
pattern can be seen in two other countries which had low Replace the word
A different
in
Change preposition
apply
amount
of that type of toxic chemical gases. Over the period, individuals in Portugal Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
were remain
the least contributor of non-ecosystem friendly Change the verb form
remained
substance
, which started at merely 1 metric Fix the agreement mistake
substances
tonnes
per person and witnessed Change to a singular noun
tonne
upward
trend to the same position as Add an article
an upward
Sweden
at approximately over 5 metric tonnes
. Coversely
, Correct your spelling
Conversely
Italia
ranking was above Portugal all the time with around 5 metric Change noun form
Italia's
tonnes
each at
1967. Unfortunately, Change preposition
in
this
country pollute
in considerable amount until it reached Wrong verb form
polluted
second
position of all in 2007 Change the article
the second
to
nearly 8 metric Change preposition
with
tonnes
each.Submitted by auzarinawukirasih19 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sweden, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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