Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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have different views on whether

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our daily activities environments,

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as

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or school be competitive, or

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whether we

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should try to help each other and be more cooperative towards our colleagues or classmates. I would argue that,

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competition

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has its own advantages

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being able to cooperate well with each other is indeed,

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essential in

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life.

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major advantage of

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is that it would result in much more desired

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in

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period of time.

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, when a group of

people

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are working on a project, some novel ideas of several creative minds are discussed in a group of

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each with a specific skill or talent so, it is most likely that the best idea is going to be implemented.

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, for developing a web application all

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, back-end

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developers

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, front-end

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developers

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and project

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managers

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should

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togther

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together

because all of them have different insights regarding

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their own field of expertise which is going to be useful in both

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the planning

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and

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implementation

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.

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, it fosters a sense of responsibility for each individual in the team because they don't

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to be the burden

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the team who

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efforts.

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, nowadays we can see that companies

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to hire

people

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with good teamwork

skills

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. They've realised that an individual who has better soft

skills

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and can

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with

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/his coworkers has more benefits compared to the

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geniuses

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alone. So, in today's

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the

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importance

of

cooperation

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is well-known and the outcome of teamwork is way better than individual

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.

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,

competition

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gives

people

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a motive to develop their

skills

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and better themselves.

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, in Iran university entrance exam is

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of the biggest competitions each student

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students for

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final exam, regular simulation exams are taken

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them

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and schools put high pressure on them

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more to get a lower rank.

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, I tend to believe

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affects

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effects

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of

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competitions outweigh

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advantages, because

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may sacrifice a lot of things that are vital for a healthy life

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as hanging with friends or doing exercise to focus on their

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or studying, which eventually would result in depression and physical health issues. So, competitions may force

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individual to improve herself but if it isn't controlled it can result in mental and physical health

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. In conclusion,

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would argue that

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one

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is more beneficial

competition

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or

cooperation

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. In my opinion,

competition

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can persuade

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to

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improve

themselves, but it can have negative effects in

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term

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if it isn't controlled.

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,

cooperation

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would result in a way better outcome,

due to

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combination

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of different

skills

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and

intellact

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intellect

minds

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leading to individual growth for all team members.