The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to

2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,

and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)
below shows different sources of
air
pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.) The given line graph compares the figure
of
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for
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air
pollutions
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pollution
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produced by four
difference
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different
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sources in the UK between 1990 and 2005.
Overall
,
It is clear that
there
were
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was
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a dramatic decrease in the number of
air
pollutants emitted by industry and the total of them,
while
the proportion of
exhausted
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exhaust
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gas from households slightly decreased and those from transport
were remain
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remained
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stable until the end of the
period
given. In 1990, the total emission rate of
air
pollutions
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pollution
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was
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apply
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started from over 6
million
tons
before significantly
dropped
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dropping
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by more than 2
million
tons
at the end
of the
period
.
Industry
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The industry
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was the main cause of the pollution, which was
initially
at nearly 6
million
tons
then
experienced a tail-off at exactly 2
million
tons
,
while
the
pollutions
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pollution
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rate from households saw a slight decrease over the
period
given
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from around a
million
ton
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tons
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to nearly 0
million
ton.
In contrast
, transport pollution was the only cause that remained stable at around 1
million
ton
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tons
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throughout a 15-year
period
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words air, period, million, tons with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • air pollutants
  • emissions
  • decrease
  • increase
  • stable
  • fluctuate
  • trend
  • peak
  • drop
  • significant
  • legislation
  • technological advancements
  • comparative analysis
  • contributors
  • households
  • transport
  • industry
  • regulation
  • pattern
  • anomaly
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