The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)

below shows different sources of

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pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.) The given line graph compares the figure

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air

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pollutions

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produced by four

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sources in the UK between 1990 and 2005.

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,

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there

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a dramatic decrease in the number of

air

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pollutants emitted by industry and the total of them,

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the proportion of

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gas from households slightly decreased and those from transport

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stable until the end of the

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given. In 1990, the total emission rate of

air

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pollutions

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was

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started from over 6

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tons

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before significantly

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by more than 2

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tons

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at the end

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of the

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Industry

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was the main cause of the pollution, which was

initially

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at nearly 6

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tons

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experienced a tail-off at exactly 2

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tons

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while

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the

pollutions

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rate from households saw a slight decrease over the

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from around a

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to nearly 0

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, transport pollution was the only cause that remained stable at around 1

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throughout a 15-year

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