The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)
below shows different sources of
air
pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)
The given line graph compares the figure of
Change preposition
for
air
pollutions
produced by four Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
difference
sources in the UK between 1990 and 2005.
Replace the word
different
Overall
, It is clear that
there were
a dramatic decrease in the number of Correct subject-verb agreement
was
air
pollutants emitted by industry and the total of them, while
the proportion of exhausted
gas from households slightly decreased and those from transport Replace the word
exhaust
were remain
stable until the end of the Wrong verb form
remained
period
given.
In 1990, the total emission rate of air
pollutions
Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
was
started from over 6 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
tons
before significantly dropped
by more than 2 Wrong verb form
dropping
million
tons
at the end
of the period
. Industry
was the main cause of the pollution, which was Add an article
The industry
initially
at nearly 6 million
tons
then
experienced a tail-off at exactly 2 million
tons
, while
the pollutions
rate from households saw a slight decrease over the Change the noun form
pollution
period
given
from around a Verb problem
apply
million
ton
to nearly 0 Fix the agreement mistake
tons
million
ton.
In contrast
, transport pollution was the only cause that remained stable at around 1 million
ton
throughout a 15-year Fix the agreement mistake
tons
period
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
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