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The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The bar chart shows data on the proportion of the British donating
money
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 to
charity
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 by
age
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 groups in 1990 and 2010.
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, in 1990, the lowest percentage of individuals giving
money
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 to
charity
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 was represented by the young,
while
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 adults in the
age
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 group of 36-50 were more likely to donate
money
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.
In addition
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, in 2010, people aged 18-25 still were
on
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 the lowest position, but a significant amount of individuals belonging to the
age
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 group of 51-65 played the biggest role in the
charity
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. To start, the ratio of youngsters decreased as the proportion was equal to just below 15% in 1990 and a bit over 5% in 2010. The same downward trend was observed in the
age
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 group of 26-35, particularly the proportion constituted more than 30% in 1990 but just under 25% in 2010. The maximum of
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 chart was represented by the individuals aged 36-50 in 1990, obviously, the indicator comprised well over 40%,
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, after a moderate drop, the number was equal to exactly 35%.
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, the number of people who spent
money
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 on
charity
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 increased in the
age
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 groups of 51-65 and 65+. 35% of people who were between 51-65 spent
money
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 on
charity
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 in 1990 and after a slight growth, the rate constituted approximately 40%. The old were represented by well over 30% and 35% in 1990 and 2010 respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, charity, age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "represented" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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