The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows the average weekly spending by families in a specific country in 1968 and 2018.
It is evident that fuel and power
accounts
for the least proportion of weekly spending in both years. Fix the agreement mistake
account
Also
, leisure saw the largest growth from 1968 to 2018.
In 1968, families spent a significant amount of weekly income on food
, with 35%. While
the other seven figures were all lay between 5% to 10%, they were evenly distributed in the spending in 1968. On the other hand
, in 2018, leisure replaced food
to become the largest spending, which was approximately 22% of the weekly income. Followed by housing(19%), food
(17%), and transport(14%). The remained
4 categories were all less than 10%, with fuel and power having the smallest percentage(4%).
Looking at the trend in the 40 years, the proportion of Wrong verb form
remaining
the
leisure Correct article usage
apply
expense
Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
became
Verb problem
has
double
. Wrong verb form
doubled
Similarly
, housing and transport spending grew almost double. While
food
, clothing and footware
, Correct your spelling
footwear
personal
goods Correct word choice
and personal
fall
almost 50%, the percentage of weekly income spent on household goods remained unchanged.Wrong verb form
fell
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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