You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The
line
graph provides information about how many people uses
the underground station passenger in Change the verb form
use
capital
of the UK .
Add an article
the capital
Overall
, as it is obviously
from the Change the word
obvious
line
graph there was fluctuation in general
trend Correct article usage
the general
in addition
the highest number was in the morning in contrast
the lowest figure was in the afternoon.
First of all, the first hour in the graph there is
increased sharply to Unnecessary verb
apply
accounted
for 100 to 200 Change the form of the verb
account
passengers
from 6:00 a.m
to 7:00 a.m
and after that the time between 7:00 and 8:00 reach to the highest point to made by 400 passengers
subsequently
the line
was dropped quickly to half passengers
to reach 200 users then
the line
is upward to reach in the afternoon just under 300 uses moreover
the line
touched 300 passengers
at 14:00 p.m
and the next step is
the line
back to decreased quickly to the lowest number it that was 100 passengers
after which the number of passengers
increased sharply between 17:00 p.m
and 18:00 p.m
.Submitted by sialamer on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words line, passengers, m with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
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