You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of users in the underground station in London between 6:00 am and 10:00 pm.
Overall
,during the peak
hours
, it is noticeable that the total
number
of
passengers
is the highest,
while
it remains stable during the day and at its lowest before and after rush
hours
. In the morning, the
number
of travellers increases dramatically from 100 to 6:00 am to reach 400 after just two
hours
.
Furthermore
, the total will be around the half between 10:00 and 11:00 am. Between 11:00 am and 03:00 pm, the total of
passengers
varied between 200 and 300, and
then
fall to a total of 100 at 16:00 just to reach it's peak to just under 400 and fall back to just under 150
passengers
at 22:00. Despite the dramatic decline
number
of
passengers
In compairason between the morning and late evening, it is noticeable that the underground station is busier in the evening than early
hours
. the minimum amount of travellers in the evening is 150
while
in the morning decrease to a 100 traveller using the underground station.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, hours, passengers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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