The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and the plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
provides
first Verb problem
apply
map
illustrates the present situation of Islip
town
centre
and second
Add an article
the second
map
shows the future changing
in the Change the form of the verb
changes
Islip
town
centre
.
To behin
with, Correct your spelling
begin
in
Change preposition
at
current
time Correct article usage
the current
the
Correct article usage
apply
Islip
town
has a large countryside area
on its north side. Moving forward there is
two large Correct subject-verb agreement
are
area
occupied by shops. In between the Change to a plural noun
areas
shops
there is Add a comma
shops,
main
road. Housing is in the Correct article usage
a main
centre
of the Islip
town
. The two essential servies
Correct your spelling
services
shool
and Correct your spelling
school
park
are opposite to each other. Former
is in Correct article usage
The former
southwest
corner and Add an article
the southwest
latter
is in almost southeast corner.
In the latter maps, Correct article usage
the latter
the
Correct article usage
apply
Islip
city
has Capitalize word
City
lot
Correct article usage
a lot
planned
development. Change preposition
of planned
First,
the city almost will cahnge
into Correct your spelling
change
oval
shape. Add an article
an oval
Country side
, shops and Correct your spelling
Countryside
main
road will be replaced by many other essential services like Add an article
the main
bus
station, shopping Add an article
a bus
centre
, car park
new housing and Fix the agreement mistake
parks
pedestrains
only. Correct your spelling
pedestrians
Housing
number Correct article usage
The housing
gonna
be increased in Wrong verb form
is going to
planned
Correct article usage
the planned
map
. Additionally
, school
and Correct article usage
the school
park
will be on the same point, however
, the school area
will remain same
but the Correct article usage
the same
park
Change the verb form
parking
area
will reduce. Moreover
, dual carriageway will another
service in Add a missing verb
be another
new
Add an article
the new
a new
map
.
Overall
, it can be seen easy many feature
will Change to a plural noun
features
be introduce
in Change the verb form
be introduced
planned
Correct article usage
the planned
map
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Vocabulary: Replace the words map, islip, town, centre, area, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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