The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and the plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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first

map

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illustrates the present situation of

Islip

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town

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centre

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and

second

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map

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shows the future

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in the

Islip

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town

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centre

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current

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time

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Islip

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town

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has a large countryside

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on its north side. Moving forward there

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two large

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area

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occupied by shops. In between the

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main

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road. Housing is in the

centre

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of the

Islip

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town

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. The two essential

servies

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services

shool

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and

park

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are opposite to each other.

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is in

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corner and

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is in almost southeast corner. In the latter maps,

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Islip

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city

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lot

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planned

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development.

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the city almost will

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change

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shape.

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, shops and

main

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road will be replaced by many other essential services like

bus

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a bus

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station, shopping

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, car

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park

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parks

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new housing and

pedestrains

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pedestrians

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number

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be increased in

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map

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school

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and

park

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will be on the same point,

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, the school

area

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will remain

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but the

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park

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area

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will reduce.

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, dual carriageway will

another

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service in

new

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map

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, it can be seen easy many

feature

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features

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Vocabulary: Replace the words map, islip, town, centre, area, park with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 6 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
6
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
38
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

193 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

dual carriageway
pedestrian-only street
reroute
infrastructure
development plan
proposed
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north side/south side
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Due to high unemployment rate in some countries, pupils should be offered only primary education and not secondary education since there are no jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.**To what extent do you agree with this statement?