the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Changes from 2007 to 2010 are depicted on the map for comparison of the route to the
city
clinic. It is obvious that
while
the town hospital remains stable, different parking spaces have been added to various areas.
Bus
stops were cancelled, and a
bus
station was installed
instead
.
According to
both descriptions, the municipal medical institution is located in the centre and the ring line is built in its north. In 2007, 6
bus
stops on the hospital highway were replaced by a
bus
station in 2010. In 2007, car parking spaces were built for both employees and the public, and in 2010, parking lots were built in distinct parts of the
city
, in the east of the
city
clinic for the public, and in the hospital line for the staff. Unlike in 2007, two crossroads saw the addition of roundabouts in 2010: one at the intersection of Hospital
Road
and Ring
Road
, and the other at the intersection of
City
Road
and Hospital
Road
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, bus, road with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic flow
  • road access
  • ring road
  • bus stops
  • bus station
  • congestion
  • parking facilities
  • pedestrian crossings
  • vehicular flow
  • organizational structure
  • accessibility
  • enhancements
  • configuration
  • dedicated
  • diverting traffic
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