The bar graph below shows the percentage growth in average property prices in three different countries between 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar graph illustrates the growth in average
property
prices
in three different countries in percentage between the year
2007 and 2010.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, according to
the bar graph, in Algeria, the average property
prices
decreases and in China, the avarage
Correct your spelling
average
property
prices
increases
. In Argentina, the average Change the verb form
increase
property
prices
fluctuates
over the period.
In Algeria, in 2007, the average Change the verb form
fluctuate
property
prices
was 6% and it experienced Fix the agreement mistake
price
4.5
% Correct article usage
a 4.5
of
decrease. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, in 2009 and 2010 the prices
of property
in Algeria decreased more,
and Remove the comma
apply
was
almost the same, and it was around 3%. Correct subject-verb agreement
were
On the contrary
, in China, the prices
of average Fix the agreement mistake
price
property
was only 2%, and it increased gradually througout
the periodCorrect your spelling
throughout
,
and reached Remove the comma
apply
at
its peak at 6.6% in the year 2010.
Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, Argentina shows 3.5% of property
prices
in the graph in 2007. It reached at
its peak in 2008 at around 4.5%. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, property
prices
experienced the lowest in 2009 at around 1.2%. The next year, it experienced slight
increase which was around 2.5%.Correct article usage
a slight
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