The diagram below shows the proposed changes to an office building. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram below shows the proposed changes to an office building. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The presented maps demonstrate alternatives that will happen for an office building in the future.
Overall
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, it will be crucial that vegetation will be destroyed, and some old facilities will be replaced by new ones;
moreover
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, the sector of
offices
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will climb.
According to
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the pictures, not only the entrance of the left green zone but
also
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the storeroom will be the same area as the prior
while
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today, we have two large districts on the left and right of the place which are grasslands, but these regions will be altered by the Outdoor seating area, and chairs, which will be in the left, and new WCs;
furthermore
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, coffee machine, the meeting area, and chairs, which will be in the right. The graphs illustrate that The main entrance, next to the right grass, will be moved to the centre of the building;
additionally
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, the 4
offices
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, in the down of the place, will be changed to the 2 largest
offices
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, which will be next to the entrance.
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, two other
offices
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will be replaced by the previous Kitchen and canteen.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words offices with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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