The table below shows the results of surveys in 2005, 2010 and 2015 about McGill University. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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on different aspects

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McGill University over a period of 10 years.

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that student services witnessed the highest number, and had the

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2005 and 2010.

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, sports and social facilities stayed in

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over the period. To commence, the survey showed teaching quality in

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academy increased from 74 to 78,

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with 86 to 88

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to 87.

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service experienced a dramatic increase from 54 to 81

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to 95. Regarding the other 2 types of information, the least feature is

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of modules

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decreased from 39 to 31

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reached 25.

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, the outcome of sports and social facilities remained static the same over the given period.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

136 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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The table below shows the results of surveys in 2005, 2010 and 2015 about McGill University. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

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Some people believe that it is better language students in small classes. Others think the number of people in the classes doesn't matter Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.