The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the number of
films
produced in three periods by five countries.
Overall
, the five countries experienced different trends in the time period.
While
countries A,B, C and D fluctuated,
country
E remained the same in the time period. As the graph shows, in
country
A, there was a gradual increase in producing
films
with around 85
films
in 2007 and
this
figure
remained the same in 2008. In 2009, it slowly decreased to about 80
films
. Turning to
country
B, there were 50
films
in 2007 and
this
figure
also
remained the same in 2008. In 2009, it rapidly grew to approximately 70
films
. Regarding
country
C, there were around 7
films
produced in 2007 and it slightly raised
figure
also
remained the same in 2008.
Then
it increased to about 22
films
in 2009. In
country
D, there were produced approximately 20
films
in 2007 and it decreased to around 10
films
in 2008.
This
figure
slowly increased to 20
films
in 2009.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words films, country, figure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 2 times.
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