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introduction conclusion present
Introduction is present and provides a basic outline of the essay. However, try to make the thesis statement clearer.
logical structure
Maintain consistent use of tenses (e.g., 'kids do not make English' should be 'kids do not learn English').
supported main points
Expand on points with more specific examples and explanations, particularly in the body paragraphs.
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Ensure clarity in expressing ideas, and avoid contradictions (e.g., you mention the importance of learning the main language first, but also highlight the benefits of learning English early).
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The essay presents both advantages and disadvantages, which helps in fairly analyzing the topic.
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Conclusion effectively summarizes the main points discussed in the essay.
relevant specific examples
Good use of a real-world example (Cambridge University study) helps in supporting the point about children's ability to learn languages.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.