Recently we are facing increasing number of cars, which poses great threat to the pedestrians and cyclists. What's more, a lot of parks need to be sacrificed as a result of the construction of railways and superhighways. Do you agree or disagree? What do you think is the best solution to satisfy residents to their heart's content?

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increasing

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population, more

cars

are

be

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needed to deal with the needs of transportation. In my view, I

agrees

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that the number of

cars

rise

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not only

make

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makes

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a negative impact on pedestrians and cyclists

,

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but

also

diminish

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diminishes

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the area of leisure

parks

because of

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the construcion

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construcion

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construction

of

railways

and superhighways. Air

polluation

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pollution

is

a

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main

problem

of

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the increacing

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increacing

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increasing

number of

cars

which emit carbon dioxide. Many pedestrians and cyclists need to cross the road

everyday

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every day

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and the carbon dioxide

result

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results

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in many health

problem

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problems

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. Many research found that there are direct relationship between

the

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air pollution and physical health. Traffic accidents

also

is another issue

about

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soaring

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the soaring

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trend of

cars

. The

road

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roads

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are

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is

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crowded and the

cars

are

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find it

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difficult to keep

safe

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a safe

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distance with

pedestrains

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pedestrians

an

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and

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cyclists. Eventually, traffic accidents happen. In order to solve the

problem

, the government need to build more

railways

or superhighways. A lot of

parks

are sacrificed and destroyed. In many countries, the residents go to leisure

parks

or

countryside

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the countryside

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to release their stress during their free time or weekends. After the construction

the

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of the

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railways

, the residents only do indoor activities in

shopping

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a shopping

the shopping

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mall

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malls

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or

sport centre

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sports centres

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rathen

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rather

than visiting the

parks

with beautiful

sencery

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scenery

. The effect of urbanization brings a negative

influnence

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influence

on environmental pollution. Improving the underground railway system can solve a part of the problems. The government may organize the cooperation between the construction developer and railway company to design more complicated

railways

to cater for the

need

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needs

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of

population

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the population

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. Good urban planning can integrate the green park and transportation construction,

while

the

governement

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government

can preserve the

parks

and deal with the

problem

of increasing

cars

at the same time. To

conlude

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conclude

, the rising number of

cars

and the destruction of the

parks

can

overcome

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be overcome

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by the cooperation between the government and

developer

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developers

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.

However

, the efforts of the public

also

is

a

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apply

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cruical

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crucial

critical

for tackling the problems.