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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts provide job
datas
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data
of
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the
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UK
 graduate and postgraduate
students
exception
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 full-time
work
 after leaving university in 2008.
Overall
, the trend of
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options was similar in
two
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the two
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group
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groups
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students
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of students
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.
In addition
,
further
 study was the most popular choice of both
UK
 graduates and postgraduates in 2008.
To begin
 with the first chart, graduates
continued
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 to study were the most popular at 29.665
students
, which was more than part-time
work
about
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 12 thousand individuals. Meanwhile, the number of
individual
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individuals
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, who did not have any jobs, was approximately equal
with
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to
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 part-time
work
 at 16.235 people.
By contrast
, Voluntary
work
 is the least choice of
UK
 graduates ar 3500 individuals. Turning toward the second graph, the trend of
postgraduates
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postgraduates'
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 job options was similar. It is readily apparent that the quantity of
UK
postgraduates
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postgraduate
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students
 was the most popular in 2008 at 2725 people.
Furthermore
, the rate of part-time
work
 ranked
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second among these at 2535
indivuduals
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individuals
.
While
,
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 the number of
students
had
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who had
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 no jobs was
three fifths
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three-fifths
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than
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of
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further
 study.
Finally
, voluntary still was at least in surveyed options ar 345
students
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, students, work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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