The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.

Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph illustrates the
production
levels
of the main kinds of fuel in the UK from 1981 to 2000. Units are measured in energy from one million tonnes of oil that produces Coal, Natural Gas, and
Petroleum
.
Overall
, it can be seen that
Petroleum
had the highest
production
levels
over the given period.
In contrast
, Coal and Natural Gas never reached more than approximately 110 energy units. In the first
year
, Natural Gas became the lowest
production
levels
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level
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that
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apply
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stood at just below 40 and remained steady until 1990.
This
kind of
fuels
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fuel
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then
experienced a significant
rose
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rise
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in 1996 from just above 40 to approximately 80 before it reached a peak at just above 100 in the final
year
.
To
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the contrary, Coal
that
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which
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stood at exactly 80 in the first
year
, significantly dropped to just below 40 in 1985. But, it
then
witnessed a slight
rose
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rise
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to approximately 60 in the next
year
and remained steady until 1989. Coal
then
slightly
drop
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dropped
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to just below 40 in 1994 and experienced a slight
rose
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rise
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to exactly 40 in the next
year
before it
keeps
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kept
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dropping until 2000.
Petroleum
, as the highest
production
levels
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level
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over the period, stood at just below 100 and
wittnessed
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witnessed
a
significat
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significant
rose
at
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to
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approximately 140 in 1984. But, in 1990,
Petroleum
significantly
drop
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dropped
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to exactly 100 before it reached a peak at just above 140 in 1999.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, levels, petroleum, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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