you have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter. - explain why you would like the job - give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ - say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Collins, I have read your advertisement in Australia magazine and I am interested

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after your child. My name is Anna, I am 22

years

old. I study

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at an

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an

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university in Poland. I am

intersted

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interested

to visit

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Australia. I love little

children

, I have younger siblings and I had to take care of them whole my childhood. I study

an

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university, specification as a teacher in the

kindergarden

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kindergarten

and OSH. I have a lot of

experiences

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from the summer camps where I was

as

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apply

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the

teamleader

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team leader

of the

children

(the group

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of

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5-8). I

have

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started

this

job since my 16

years

old. I have received the certificate

take

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care of the

children

and the first avoid. I worked as

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a babysisster

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babysisster

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babysitter

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last

5

years

with

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children

age

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of

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3-8

years

old. I have certificate C1

from

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in

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English, German and Spain, I could

learn

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your child these languages if you want. I would like to spend my free time

with

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traveling

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travelling

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, meeting

the

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new people, discovering

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new cultures and proofing my English. If my email is

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for you, please let me know, I will be happy to meet you and your child. Kind regards Andrea Kroupa