The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
There are two different
chart
in the study case of Australian Change to a plural noun
charts
household
energy
use
and its greenhouse
gas
emission
. Both of the charts are related according to
the points inside the chart of household
energy
use
and the
Correct article usage
apply
greenhouse
gas
emissions. From 100%, the biggest percentage of household
energy
use
is heating on
40%, followed by water heating Change preposition
at
30
%, other appliances Change preposition
at 30
15
%, RefrigerationChange preposition
at 15
7
%, lightingChange preposition
at 7
4
%, and CoolingChange preposition
at 4
2
%. But why does the Change preposition
at 2
household
energy
use
presentation are different if we compare it with the greenhouse
gas
emissions? First of all, we need to know what is a mission a mission is some sort of waste
that we produce from sort of
activities, Change preposition
apply
in
Correct word choice
and in
this
context is energy
waste
that
produced from Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
household
energy
usage that turn
into Change the verb form
turns
greenhouse
gas
emission
. So each Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
gas
emission
from the
Correct article usage
apply
household
activities are
different Change the verb form
is
depend
on what activities. As an example even Change the form of the verb
depending
Refrigeration
only Correct word choice
though Refrigeration
share
7% of Correct subject-verb agreement
shares
the
Correct article usage
apply
household
energy
use
, it share
4% of the Change the verb form
shares
greenhouse
gas
emission
because the Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
waste
that
created Correct pronoun usage
apply
from
Refrigeration Change preposition
by
was
bigger. It is the same case with Wrong verb form
is
the
other Correct article usage
apply
household
energy
use
, some of them has
lower Change the verb form
have
waste
, and some of them has
higher Correct subject-verb agreement
have
waste
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Vocabulary: Replace the words household, energy, use, greenhouse, gas, emission, waste with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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