The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
As seen in the first
chart
, which presents the percentage of the use of energy in Australia
Correct your spelling
Australian
household
, other appliances Fix the agreement mistake
households
dominates
the Change the verb form
dominate
chart
with 24% followed by water heating, 23%. While
in the third position is heating and cooling with 20%. The energy used for cooking and stand by
is 5%. Add a hyphen
stand-by
This
represents that it is mostly used for things related to control
the atmospheric conditions in a household. Most Wrong verb form
controlling
of
Change preposition
apply
the
household uses energy to either help them cool the temperature of either the house or the water they are using or heat it up. Correct article usage
apply
While
lighting with only 11%
Meanwhile, in the second chart
, it is seen that heating and cooling dominates
the Correct subject-verb agreement
dominate
chart
with 38%. Followed by water heating with
25% and other appliances Change preposition
at
with
16%. Change preposition
at
While
lighting and refrigeration stand with
the same Change preposition
at
percetage
, 7%.
With stand-by as the least Correct your spelling
percentage
percetage
at the number of 3%.Correct your spelling
percentage
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