WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows average UK salaries, by city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart describes the approximated salaries of Great
Brittain
as per 7 cities.
Correct your spelling
Britain
Overall
, the largest manpower
receives the highest remuneration from London, England whereas
the lowest rated manpower
is from Birmingham, England. Though all the people
are from UK
Correct article usage
the UK
but
their salaries are differently ranged Remove the conjunction
apply
due to
variations in cities.
The four most significant salaries are given to the people
from London , Cambridge, Bristol and Edinburgh. 50951 people
individually get almost 33634 pounds
and a number of 2180 gets 29854 pounds
per person. 27828 pounds
are given each
Change preposition
to each
people
from Bristol and similarly
27592 Add a comma
similarly,
pounds
are provided to the people
from Edinburgh.
The lowest wages are provided to the manpower
from Birmingham, Manchester & Glasgow. Here people
from Birmingham get the poorest wages with a value of 25531 pounds
among all the mentioned cities. A manpower
of Glasgow (3113) gets 26150 pounds
and simultaneously 4643 people
from Manchester get 25909 pounds
as their monthly wages.Submitted by writing9common on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words manpower, people, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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