The pie chart illustrates the primary global causes of land degradation, while the table highlights the main factors contributing to this issue by region in the 1990s. Overall, over-grazing was the leading cause of agricultural land degradation globally, with Europe being the most affected region. Looking more closely at the pie chart, over-grazing is clearly the main factor behind global land degradation, accounting for 35%. Deforestation follows at 30%, and over-cultivation contributes 28%. A small percentage is attributed to other causes. The table shows that Europe experienced the highest level of land degradation, with 23% of its land affected, primarily due to deforestation, which accounted for 9.8%. Oceania followed the global trend, with over-grazing as the leading cause of land degradation. Lastly, North America had the lowest percentage of land degradation, with only 5% of its land affected.
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The pie chart illustrates the primary global causes of
land
degradation
, while
the table highlights the main factors contributing to this
issue by region in the 1990s.
Overall
, over-grazing was the leading cause of agricultural land
degradation
globally, with Europe being the most affected region.
Looking more closely at the pie chart, over-grazing is clearly the main factor behind global land
degradation
, accounting for 35%. Deforestation follows at 30%, and over-cultivation contributes 28%. A small percentage is attributed to other causes.
The table shows that Europe experienced the highest level of land
degradation
, with 23% of its land
affected, primarily due to
deforestation, which accounted for 9.8%. Oceania followed the global trend, with over-grazing as the leading cause of land
degradation
. Lastly
, North America had the lowest percentage of land
degradation
, with only 5% of its land
affected.Submitted by namoisma on
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