You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012 You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph compares the quantity of
coffee
exported from Brazil
, Colombia
and Costa
Rica
between 2002 and 2012.
It is clear that
Brazil
was the country that during the period aforementioned exported coffee
the most whereas
Colombia
exported coffee
the least from 2002 to 2012.
In 2002, Costa
Rica
transported 15 million
kilograms
of coffee
, followed by Brazil
with 12 million
kilograms
. In contrast
, Colombia
exported the least with 5 million
kilograms
.
In 2008, we observe that Brazil
increased their transportation to 20 million
kilograms
from 2002 exporting the most that year. However
, Costa
Rica
and Colombia
decreased their coffee
exportation to 13 million
kilograms
and 3 million
kilograms
in 2002, respectively. In addition
, from 2008 to 2012, the three countries increased their exports steadily. Furthermore
, Brazil
, Costa
Rica
and Colombia
delivered 25 million
kilograms
, 20 million
kilograms
and 15 million
kilograms
, respectively in 2012.
Overall
, Brazil
rose their coffee
exports steadily while
Colombia
and Costa
Rica
fluctuated between 2002 and 2012.Submitted by jessica.pastor.87 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, brazil, colombia, costa, rica, million, kilograms with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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