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The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012

The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012
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The line graph compares the quantity of
coffee
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 exported from
Brazil
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,
Colombia
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 and
Costa
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Rica
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 between 2002 and 2012.
It is clear that
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Brazil
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 was the country that during the period aforementioned exported
coffee
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 the most
whereas
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Colombia
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 exported
coffee
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 the least from 2002 to 2012. In 2002,
Costa
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Rica
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 transported 15
million
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kilograms
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 of
coffee
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, followed by
Brazil
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 with 12
million
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kilograms
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.
In contrast
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,
Colombia
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 exported the least with 5
million
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kilograms
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. In 2008, we observe that
Brazil
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 increased their transportation to 20
million
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kilograms
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 from 2002 exporting the most that year.
However
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,
Costa
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Rica
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 and
Colombia
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 decreased their
coffee
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 exportation to 13
million
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kilograms
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 and 3
million
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kilograms
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 in 2002, respectively.
In addition
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, from 2008 to 2012, the three countries increased their exports steadily.
Furthermore
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,
Brazil
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,
Costa
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Rica
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 and
Colombia
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 delivered 25
million
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kilograms
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, 20
million
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kilograms
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 and 15
million
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kilograms
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, respectively in 2012.
Overall
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,
Brazil
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 rose their
coffee
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 exports steadily
while
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Colombia
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 and
Costa
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Rica
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 fluctuated between 2002 and 2012.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, brazil, colombia, costa, rica, million, kilograms with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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