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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012 You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012 You should write at least 150 words.
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The line graph compares the number of
coffee
 traded from three different countries,
Brazil
, Colombia, and Costa Rica, from 2002 to 2012.
Overall
, it can be seen that the amount of
coffee
 sold in
Brazil
 had an upward trend throughout the years. Regardless of some fluctuations, the remaining countries increased their export numbers by the end of the period. In 2002,
Brazil
's total
export
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was
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 around 13
million
kilograms
 before rising to roughly 25
million
kilograms
 by 2015, despite its small decrease in 2010.
This
 amount exhibited
Brazil
 as the highest exporter from 2004 to 2012. In comparison, the number of
coffee
export
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 in Costa Rica stood at 15
million
kilograms
 in 2010 and gradually fell to approximately 7
million
kilograms
 by 2006. It,
however
, surged to almost 20
million
kilograms
 by the end of the period.
On the other hand
, the international trade of Colombia's
coffee
 was approximately 5
million
kilograms
 in 2002.
This
 figure increased to nearly 11
million
kilograms
 by 2006 before dropping to just about 2
million
kilograms
 by 2008.
However
, it sharply rose to about 15
million
kilograms
 by 2012.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, brazil, million, kilograms with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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