Some people believe that the biggest problem facing cities is the increasing number of cars. Others say there more serious problems.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, the

issue

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of urbanization has brought numerous

problems

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to city life.

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some believe that the increasing

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of

cars

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is the primary

issue

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cities

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face today, others argue that there are more serious issues. 38 The increasing

number

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of

cars

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could lead to

health

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problems

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. It is widely known that air is crucial to

human’s

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lives. The increasing

number

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of

cars

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contribute

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contributes

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to air pollution, which could

cause

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environmental

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problem

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problems

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and deteriorate

people’s

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health

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. The car

emmision

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emission

contains poisonous substances and elements which could directly harm

people’s

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lung

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and other organs through breathing.

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, the

emmision

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emission

of

cars

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could

cause

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air pollution in the city which could lead to a series of physical

problems

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.

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, the

problem

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of traffic

jam

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in the city could be aggravated because of the increasing

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cars

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number of cars

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. Congestion gridlock is a common

problem

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in most urban areas, especially during commuting hours and holidays.

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,

people’s

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life

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lives

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could be affected by the heavy traffic because of the

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increase

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number

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of

cars

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. One of the more

seious

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serious

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issue

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issues

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than the rising car numbers is the

noise

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pollusion

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pollution

in

cities

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. It is widely known that

the

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noise

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pollusion

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pollution

could have harmful effects on both human

health

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and

urban

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environment. When people are

prolonged exposure

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exposed

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to loud

noise

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, the sensitive structures in the ear might be damaged, which

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cause

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causes

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physical

problems

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.

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, persistent

noise

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could affect

people’s

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sleeping quality and

cause

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insomnia which

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increase

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increases

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people’s

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stress levels, which could lead to anxiety and affect mental

health

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.

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, overcrowded could lead to serious

problems

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in

cities

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. Public service facilities would

increase

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due to

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the

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overcrowded,

such

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as educational

system

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systems

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, commercial areas, and medical areas.

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this

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could be an advantage for

city’s

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the city’s

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economic growth,

people’s

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life quality could be affected.

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, The

increase

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public

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service facilities would exacerbate the shortage of residential space in

cities

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, which could lead to an

increase

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in housing prices.

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, residents in

cities

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are facing a series of

problems

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caused by overcrowded. In conclusion,

although

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the growing

number

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of

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cars

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car

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incities

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in cities

is a serious

problem

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, it is not the most urgent

issue

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. Other

problems

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such

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as issues caused by overcrowded and

noise

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pollution

also

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require public attention.