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The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012.

The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012.
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The following bar and line chart shows information about average monthly temperatures and
swim suit
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swimsuit
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sales
 in New York, broken down into the first six
months
 of 2012, indicated as
Farenheit
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Fahrenheit
 and Hundred
thousands
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thousand
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 US
dollar
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dollars
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, respectively.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that
the
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April received the highest revenues,
whereas
that
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of in
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June
was gain
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 the fewest sum.
However
, it is interesting to note that New Yorkers prepare themselves with bathing suits prior to the peak temperature in
June
.
To begin
 with, a closer look at the bar chart shows that the
sales
 constantly increased during the first three
months
 before
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its
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peak in April and
plummeted
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 in the remaining
months
. At roughly $280, April had the largest sum of profits among all other
months
, followed by March at $150, February at $125, and January, respectively. Surprisingly, it is noticeable that
sales
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figure
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figures
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 in May fell dramatically
at
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 under $100, at about $80,
while
 in
June
 made the fewest
sales
 at approximately $20. With regards to the relationship with temperatures in New York City, starting off the first month of the year with slightly above 30
Farenheit
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Fahrenheit
. February experienced
small
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a small
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dropped
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 to 30
Farenheit
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Fahrenheit
 and rose at a constant rate of 9
farenheit
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fahrenheit
 monthly and ending with
at
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65
Farenheit
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Fahrenheit
June
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in June
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.
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