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The table below shows the amount of waste production(in millions of tonnes) in six different countries in three different years over a twenty-year period.

The table below shows the amount of waste production(in millions of tonnes) in six different countries in three different years over a twenty-year period.
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The table compares the figure
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waste
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 material production in Ireland, Japan, Korea, Poland, Portugal, and
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 in three different years over a twenty-year period. We can see from the table that the
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 production in
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 was higher than
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 countries in the three different years.
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 Korea was the only country where the
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 output decreased. In 1980,
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 had the highest
waste
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 material output
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 which stood at 131
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tonnes
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 figure grew up to 192
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 in 2000. Japan produced the second highest
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waste
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 among all the nations in 1980, and its figure increased significantly from 32
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tonnes
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 in 1990 to 53
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 in 2000. It is clear from the table that Korea's
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 output experienced a falling trend from 31
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tonnes
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 in 1990 to 19
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tonnes
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 in 2000.
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 2000, the
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 production in Ireland and Portugal
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 the least among the six countries, including Poland which generated 6.6
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, amount, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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