The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The table shows information about the three different countries with the highest populations. These countries include China,
India
, and the United States of America.
Firstly
, China has about 1.415 billion people with an increase of 0.39% citizens since the year 2017. The
country
has a density of 151,
however
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it has a land area of 9.388
million
square
kilometers
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and an urban
population
of 58%.
Meanwhile
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India
has only about 1.354 billion
and
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an
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1.11%
increament
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increase
ever since 2017. There are over 455 people per square
kilometer
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in
this
country
with a land space of 2.973
million
yet
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32% of humans
in
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India
.
Moreover
in the United States of
America
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there are only 327
million
of
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people with a
population
rise
over
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0.71%. In spite of
that
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this
country
has large land covering about 9.147
million
square kilometers.
Additionally
, the USA has 83% of citizens. In
conclution
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conclusion
, the
country
with the most urban
population
is the USA yet it has only 327
million
humans.
While
India
has the largest density and China won in
population
.
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