The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The table shows information about the three different countries with the highest populations. These countries include China,
India
, and the United States of America.
Firstly
, China has about 1.415 billion people with an increase of 0.39% citizens since the year 2017. The country
has a density of 151, however
it has a land area of 9.388 Add a comma
however,
million
square kilometers
and an urban Change the spelling
kilometres
population
of 58%. Meanwhile
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Meanwhile,
India
has only about 1.354 billion and
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apply
an
1.11% Change the article
a
increament
ever since 2017. There are over 455 people per square Correct your spelling
increase
kilometer
in Change the spelling
kilometre
this
country
with a land space of 2.973 million
yet has
32% of humans Unnecessary verb
apply
in
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are in
India
. Moreover
in the United States of America
there are only 327 Add a comma
America,
million
of
people with a Change preposition
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population
rise over
0.71%. In spite of Change preposition
of over
that
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that,
this
country
has large land covering about 9.147 million
square kilometers. Additionally
, the USA has 83% of citizens.
In conclution
, the Correct your spelling
conclusion
country
with the most urban population
is the USA yet it has only 327 million
humans. While
India
has the largest density and China won in population
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