The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The above two pie charts
reveals
data on Change the verb form
reveal
tourists
primary reasons to Change noun form
tourists'
tourist's
visited
Change the form of the verb
visit
the
Orange Correct article usage
apply
city
in 2006 compared to 2016.
Capitalize word
City
Overall
, the most significant feature is the annual events contribute
the highest percentage in 2006. Wrong verb form
contributed
While
in 2016 the strongest score was related to restaurants.
It is evident that the number of annual events show
dramatically decline from 45% in 2006 to 32% in 2016. Change the verb form
shows
In contrast
, Correct article usage
the restaurants
restaurants
percentages Change the noun form
restaurant
was
10% in 2006 Change the verb form
were
then
sharply growth
to 41% in 2016. Replace the word
grew
However
, the theater and others reason
had 13% 5% in 2006. Fix the agreement mistake
other reasons
Moreover
, in 2016 the theaters and other reasons exhibited a similar score within 8%.Related to museums the percentage was high in 2006 with
27% Change preposition
at
then
started to decrease gradually to 11%.Submitted by rahafalkhashti7 on
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