The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Average distance in miles travelled per person per year, by mode of travel.
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Firstly
, the table gives information regarding changes in modes
of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. After that, we have nine categories. These are walking, bicycle, car
, local bus, long-distance bus, train, taxi, other and all modes
.
Secondly
, when we look at the chart involves two years. These are 1985 and 2000. Later on, the highest rate
is
the Wrong verb form
was
car’s
Change noun form
car
rate
in 1985 and the lowest rate
is
taxis in 1985. These rates are 3199 and 13. As an extra the highest Wrong verb form
was
rate
was 4806 in 2000 and the lowest rate
was 41 in 2000. Both car
rate
is high in 1985 and 2000. As an extra walking rate
is close to each other. Taking everything into account people preferred to car
, local bus, train and others. Generally, the further
ratio has a car
.
All in all, the which is above mentioned describes selecting and reporting the main features,
and making comparisons where relevant. From my point of view, I strongly believe that all Remove the comma
apply
modes
had 4,740 in 1985 and 6,475 in 2000. Furthermore
, all modes
increased in 2000.Submitted by eylulelveren7 on
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