A friend of yours recently gave you a nice birthday present. Your friend has written a letter to you asking for advice regarding a visit that his/her parents will be making to your area in the near future. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • recommend a place where they can stay • suggest the places they can visit • offer to do something with them
Dear Sir
I am writing to you about some places that you can have a
party
with your family or friends
There are fascinating places in my town. For
instance
historical Add a comma
instance,
building
, restaurants, nice-looking Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
garden
, Fix the agreement mistake
gardens
well-known
buildings so that many tourists come here. Correct word choice
and well-known
According to
statistics, 200 billion people come a year. There is the best restaurant
where you can enjoy having a party
. Located in the city center
. The Change the spelling
centre
restaurant
is perfect
place to come with family.
The Add an article
the perfect
restaurant
has a lot of amenities. Foe
example delivery service that you can Correct your spelling
For
order
by stand in your home therefore
many customers want to order
from the restaurant
. If you give
a Verb problem
have
party
in the restaurant
, the restaurant
will give you special
menu. Correct article usage
a special
Last
year I made my birthday in
Change preposition
apply
order
that
the Correct word choice
apply
restaurant
’s officiant gave me a special menu to order
. The menu has different types of food and I have been using one from the list of foods. Many people give a description of using the restaurant
to have a party
. The restaurant
’s officials run smoothly and they cook very well, fast and of better quality than many restaurant’s
employees.
If you have a relative who is well Change noun form
restaurant
know
, the Wrong verb form
known
restaurant
will contract with your relative so that the restaurant
discounts that you can eat cheap food.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Your fatefully ObitooSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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coherence cohesion
Consider creating distinct paragraphs for each main idea to improve clarity.
task achievement
Make sure to address all parts of the task explicitly: recommend a place to stay, suggest places to visit, and offer to do something with them.
coherence cohesion
The letter uses a friendly closing, which is appropriate for a letter to a friend.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is friendly, which suits the context of writing to a friend.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.