You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people think that we should replace old buildings and houses in cities with more modern buildings. Other people think we should protect old buildings. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many thought that ancient

buildings

and houses should be upgraded into modern

buildings

while

building more of

this

kind in urban areas.

On the other hand

, some of them debate that old

buildings

should be kept.

Although

, these both of view

is

Correct subject-verb agreement

are

show examples

contrary

from

Change preposition

to

show examples

each other, but

it

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

will give it's own advantage. Replacing old

buildings

with modern

buildings

will help

one

city

to have a better modern look as a development

to

Change preposition

of

show examples

its infrastructure and future planning. In terms of structuring a new infrastructure plan

of

Change preposition

for

show examples

a country, modernised

buildings

will win over old

buildings

. Modern

utillities

Correct your spelling

utilities

of a

city

are important in order to compete with other cities around the world despite that it will mirror how developed

one

country is.

For example

, people from worldwide now

sees

Correct subject-verb agreement

see

show examples

New York

City

in America as

one

of the most advanced

city

Change to a plural noun

cities

show examples

in the world because of its many skyscrapers

centered

Change the spelling

centred

show examples

in the

city

.

However

, keeping ancient

buildings

in cities can be

one

of the most significant symbols in the place. Old

buildings

that were kept for

over

Change preposition

apply

show examples

hundreds of years can

define

Wrong verb form

be defined

show examples

as a heritage to the country as the building kept its own unique features built from the past.

For instance

, there is an old village called Kampung Melayu that

are

Correct subject-verb agreement

is

show examples

still kept

until

Change preposition

apply

show examples

today in the middle of Kuala Lumpur

city

in Malaysia and many tourists

found

Wrong verb form

find

show examples

this

place a kind of attraction

for

Change preposition

apply

show examples

them

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

. Despite

this

,

this

can

also

pull more foreign tourist to come which lead to an

increase

Replace the word

increased

show examples

percentage of tourism in that place. In conclusion, both of the view gives different

advantage

Fix the agreement mistake

advantages

show examples

to the

city

from different aspects.

A proper

Correct article usage

Proper

show examples

future planning towards modernised cities can be realistic if authorities

decided

Wrong verb form

decide

show examples

to replace old

buildings

while

keeping these ancient

buildings

as a heritage to the nation.