The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to four countries from 1990 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the
graph
shows the average of countries importing from Austria in the period between 1990 to 2012 .
the graph
shows the percentages fluctuated in some countries like USA
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the USA
while
others had a sharp increasing
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increase
declining
like Replace the word
decline
China
and USA
respectively.
From 1990 to 2000 the Correct article usage
the USA
graph
illustrated the highest exporting from Australia to Japan at 26% , while
China
and India came with the lowest percentage at 3% ,furthermore
was us
in the middle at 11%, Correct pronoun usage
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Although
the percentage remained the same at 3% in India till 2000, the other ¬-percentages increased in us to 11% and China
at 5%, main while
declining in Japan.
From 2000 to 2012, the graph
gave a gradual increase in China
at 27% while
a range of stability 21
% in Japan
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at 21
one
hand in India the percentage gradually increased from 2000 to 2010 till reached Correct article usage
the one
at
6% followed by a sharp decline in 2012,Change preposition
apply
mainwhile
in the USA gradually decreased from 2000 to 2010 Correct your spelling
meanwhile
at
only 5% followed by Change preposition
to
sharp
increase at 6% in 2012Add an article
a sharp
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