The two pie charts below show total world energy consumption and electricity generation for last year.
The given pie charts show
the
information about total global consumption and Correct article usage
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electricity
generation for last
year, indicated as percentages.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that oil
was consumed the most across the globe, whereas
that
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of
coal accounted for the largest in generating Change preposition
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electricity
. However
, it is interesting to note that though oil
mainly use
in several countries, yet, its application in generating Change the form of the verb
used
electricity
was not that promising.
To begin
with, a closer look at pie
chart presents that fossil fuels like Correct article usage
the pie
oil
and coal along with
gas were
accounted for about Unnecessary verb
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four fifth
of the total Add a hyphen
four-fifth
energy
consumption, while
the remaining 20% were broken down into various alternative energy
resources. At 34.3%, oil
had the greatest percentages among all other types of energy
consumptions
, followed by coal and Gas with approximately 10% and 5% lower, at 25.1% and 20.9%, respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
consumption
While
energy
from combustible renewables and wastes accounted for 10.6% which was about threefold of hydro energy
at 2.2%, Nuclear energy
was 6.5%.
With regards to electricity
generation, coal, on one
hand, accounted for Correct article usage
the one
largest
ratio in creating Correct article usage
the largest
electricity
with nearly 40%. Next,
gas was the second at roughly 20%, followed by Hydro
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hydroenergy
energy
and Nuclear plant
at 16.1% and 15.7%, respectively.Fix the agreement mistake
plants
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