The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The presented graph demonstrates the process of producing

power

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from coal.

Overall

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, it is important that

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energy production from coal has 9 various stages

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apply

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starting at mines and ending at cities and companies.

According to

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the diagram, at the start, the coal that we need has to be extracted from the mind;

then

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the coals are the big stone, yet we need to have small pieces of coal;

as a result

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, the devices which crush stones make us the tiny coal;

thereafter

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power

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plants, far from mine, need coal, so, some trucks transport these crushing coals to the factory. The picture illustrates that in the

power

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plant

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plant,

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we have 4 different sectors.

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, the place whose name is Gassifier produce hot gasses from burning coal; and throws out the solid waste.

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, the gas, having a lot of temperature, goes to the cooler to lose a little temperature. Later gas, which becomes colder, is sent to the gas

power

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plant to generate electricity;

furthermore

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, in

this

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place

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place,

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the state heat energy is conducted with air. The electricity is sent to the houses and industrial regions by cable.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

189 words

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The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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