The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The presented graph demonstrates the process of producing
power
from coal.
Overall
, it is important that this
energy production from coal has 9 various stages which
starting at mines and ending at cities and companies.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
According to
the diagram, at the start, the coal that we need has to be extracted from the mind; then
the coals are the big stone, yet we need to have small pieces of coal; as a result
, the devices which crush stones make us the tiny coal; thereafter
, power
plants, far from mine, need coal, so, some trucks transport these crushing coals to the factory.
The picture illustrates that in the power
plant
we have 4 different sectors. Add a comma
plant,
Firstly
, the place whose name is Gassifier produce hot gasses from burning coal; and throws out the solid waste. Secondly
, the gas, having a lot of temperature, goes to the cooler to lose a little temperature. Later gas, which becomes colder, is sent to the gas power
plant to generate electricity; furthermore
, in this
place
the state heat energy is conducted with air. The electricity is sent to the houses and industrial regions by cable.Add a comma
place,
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