The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas of a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
this
line charts
depicts Change the determiner
chart
number
Correct article usage
the number
about
multiple countries from 1978 to 2007 it is clear from the graph thatChange preposition
of
had
Verb problem
there was
increase
andCorrect article usage
an increase
Correct article usage
a
of
them.
Change preposition
in
According to
what is shown, the coast
Correct your spelling
cost
had been
40 per cent in 1987 it Wrong verb form
was
is undergo
to Change the verb form
is undergoing
is undergone
leveled
off Change the spelling
levelled
then
had decrease
after that swiftly, Change the verb form
decreased
that is
the coast
one of Correct your spelling
cost
Correct article usage
the reason
reason
Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
to
Change preposition
for to
increase
it
is Correct pronoun usage
apply
desertificaiton
and heat Correct your spelling
desertification
Moreover
, lake
of rain Add an article
the lake
a lake
it
is Correct pronoun usage
apply
reason
Correct article usage
the reason
to make
that earth rough. Change preposition
for making
While
the lakes
had Correct quantifier usage
number of lakes
starts
Change the verb form
started
from
Change preposition
at
the
10 per cent in 1987 and had Correct article usage
apply
Add an article
an increase
increase
in 1992 after that from 1997 to 2007 had Wrong verb form
increased
get
Wrong verb form
got
Add an article
a wave
wave
for a Fix the agreement mistake
waves
lot
reasons Add the preposition
lot of
Firstly
, the rains not
Add the comma(s)
, not
a
constant it may change Correct article usage
apply
at
Change preposition
in
winter
season had Correct article usage
the winter
increase
comparison the
summer the rain had Change preposition
to the
decrease
which why it is the Wrong verb form
decreased
coast
had wave Secondly
, the la consist from the rains.
To sum up
, we could say that the coast
and the lakesit
may change many times depending on the conditions and weather.Correct your spelling
lakes
lakes it
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Vocabulary: Replace the words increase, coast with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 2 times.
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